Nov
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Blind Filly Sequel First Chapter Draft? · 9:25am Nov 25th, 2016
http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/1027599
password = Horseshoe
Rough draft, not even a single 1k yet. Quick question to you, the readers.
Does what I have so far embody the ramblings from a little girl? It's not too far disconnected that it only feels like someone intentionally writing the part and trying to make you clumsily believe it, I guess is what I'm trying to avoid.
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